The Officail RPG story-so-far

]Hey you. Yes you. You're the one who want's to be part of the RPG game we decided to do. But I MUST MUST MUST warn you of
onerous task ahead.

Okay, let the stroy begin. Im just gonna, cut and paste all the posts that are part of the stroyline. They were located in the DTPA thread.
I must WARN you, yet again. This is alot to read. Alot, and I mean alot, almost harry potter sized. lol


Note: the posts marked red aren't too important, but I put them there so you know what's happening. lol.

Note also: green posts are parts of the story gone off target. lol

UNKNOWNDNA
*Epilogue:
Far beyond the realm of the living, a great beast rests.
Imprisoned within the runes of the ancients, the creature resides. Within a magical seal of the ancients, the depraving voices of a dreadful dark lord lost it's reach. Blissful within these runes, the creature once found peace.

But the rest came to it's end, and deep beneathe the seal was broken. Like once before, a child of the burning hellfire - awakens!*

Summoned into a realm of life and blossom, the creature takes it's dreadful form. The skies are filled with stars, and there's a sweet scent in the air. Gazing out on the dark horizont, the beast repletes with joy.

As a thunder strike, the creatures mind is suddently filled with screams, terrorizing it's inner. From the deranging voices, it's mind is corrupting, and an imploring scream resounds through the night. With a loud groan, it croumbles and falls. The ancient curse of the being had awakened.

Raising, and now standing in the moonshine, the creature hungers again. With a blackened heart, and a cursed soul, the terrors eyes glows from a burning hatred. Driven by the will of the forsaken, the creature seeks out the pitchblack night - onwards, it seeks out to hunt and devour. Seeks out to drive all living to the flames of demise.

Later, the beast encounters a fleeing IHTNC. Quickly, the beast melds into the enviroment like a chameleon. Swiftly, the creature appears out of nowhere and strikes. IHNNC, which did not heed the creatures prescence, turns his head just in time to spot the beast. In a flash, a long sharp talon is gored into his chest. A sinister strike, making IHTNC unable to scream. The creature, standing 13 feet tall lifts IHTNC up in the air, and looks him deep onto his eyes, while it growls. IHTNC spits into the creatures face, and is severed in two within a split second. The beast howls upon the dark sky, and disappears into the night, leaving IHTNC in two pieces.

[This is when UknownDNA introduced the idea, but he failed to alert us that it was a stroy he was beginning, so bear with the killing bits, because later we fix that]


CLAR380
Scary!!! lol...

From Clar380's twisted body laid still, being nursed back to health by the bitchy bitch of a nurse who had druged him full of poisons. In his dreams, he heard the screams of women and children, their lives coming to a horrid end. Clar380 felt something sinister had come into the world, it's dark presence cowrding the air.

He awoke, his eyes darted around the room, seeking out what had awoken him from his slumber. His heart skipped a beat as a nurse, working the night shift, walked pass his room, humming. He then realised he was in hospital, and was wondering how he got here. "ihopethisnamecounts!" He spat at the floor, remebering all that had happened.

He sought revenge...

His current state was flimsy, he thought it idiotic to seek vengence so he spent his time healing, with the help of his nurse. "Bitch", he often said in an undertone. He was weak, too weak. Something was terribly wrong, he sensed something had happened during his sleep, then he remebered the dream.
Darkness....

He contemplated his next move to capture and perhaps torture ihopethisnamecounts before dipsosing of him, but he couldn't sense him anywhere, it was like he had dissapeared. He delved deep into his mind, and he felt cold eyes on him, filled with malicious intent and darkness. He had never felt something this terrible in his life, he knew it wasn't human and he knew it had killed hopethisnamecounts. He felt fear for the first time in his life, he had to kill this beast for killing his most hated enemy before him.

Clar380 went on quest to kill the beast, but he knew he couldn't kill it by himself, he needed help. He thought it blasphemous to even consider creating alliances with his enemies.

(Please, sombody... Help me kill the beast!!!)


JFDHFJUG
Joining his enemy was never his intent but he was running out of options, he had fought these darklings twisted by hatred and anger and had been victorious for a while. but no great evil can be destroyed forever. so with his vast resources jfdhfjug gathers runes, talismans, and other tools. the plan to bind back the evil and destroy its body dispercing it back into the dark plane untill it's next awakening.

finding this creature wasn't an option he had to make the creature come to him. since clar380 had asked for help he said that he could help for his job was the most important! Clar380 was bait!

after setting the trap, and digging a hole six miles deep and lining the walls with runes and latin sigils to seal the creature jfdhfjug tied clar380 to the thin layer covering the hole and stabbed him in the legs.

Clar380's screams of agony were picked up by the creature who lives off pain and suffering, the creature rushed towards clar380 and leapt into the air coming down right on top of him breaking the covering to the pit and they both fell. jfdhfjug sealed the pit with a rune covered lid and the ancient power of the runes sealed the dark power inside, ... for now.


CLAR380
The beast's power was silenced, he fell into his deep sleep to await his next awakening...

Clar380, being crushed by the massive body of the beast slipped between the sleep world and the waking world, every now and then thinking of his enemies faces. A betrayal like this could never be forgiven, he had to kill him. Clar380, drew as much strength and courage from within to release himself from this pit of dispair and succeeded in breaking the seal and quickly resealing it with his trusted sword. He had no weapon to protect himself but still he carried on. Using the skills he had learned from his master, he crept into the house of his sleeping enemy, like a shadow upon the wind, slipped poison into his coffee and waited for the sun to rise.

The sun rose, roosters crowed and the butterflies fluttered. jfdhfjug woke unknowingly of his premature death awaiting him in his kitchen he made his coffee took a sip and begun to choke. Clar380, stepped from the beneath the sink and aproached his dieing enemy.

"Evil begets evil" he muttered silently into jfdhfjug's ears as he gasped for air. Clar380 laughed and took his enemy by the neck and twisted it. With a satisfying crunch, his enemy's lifeless body fell to the floor with a loud thump.

"Mwuahahahahahaha!" Clar380 dissapeared into the light, IHTNC still on his mind.


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
Vengeance!

The only word on IHTNC's mind as he haven't got the chance to defend himself against the beast who killed him...

Though his body is severely wounded (actually ripped in half, but just sewn together), IHTNC trains hard to return the favor to the beast, just as what clar380 had received from him...

After several weeks, IHTNC regained his strength and decided to "repay" the horrible beast. While searching, he found clar380 resting. The moment their eyes met, they immediately know it was on... The killing time has begun!

clar380 was clearly outmatched by IHTNC because of the rigorous training he had been to. With one strike, clar380's body was thrown upwards. He managed to flip and prepare for landing but he saw IHTNC jump towards him.

SWOOOSH! SCHUUCKK!

Both warriors landed on their feet but only IHTNC stood alive. Seeing clar380 dead and not a chance to ask where the beast is, IHTNC just walks away searching for his main target...

No one can kill me until that beast is dead!


CLAR380
Clar380 kept still, using his skills of deception, he played dead waited for his enemy to leave and pursued him from the shadows. IHTNC arrived at the beasts seal and saw clar380's katana wedged into the ancient lid lined with runes. Clar380 watched from the darkness, waiting.

IHTNC kicked and poked aat the lid and laughed at how flimsily jfdhfjug had placed it. He pulled on the sword, recognised it as clar380's and stopped in his tracks. A flash of light blinded him and the beast exploded from beneath the seal cracking it into small shards of rock. IHTNC was riddled with little pockets of rocks all over his body. Squelling in pain, the beast stopped, feeding of his pain he gained strengthed and smashed IHTNC in the head with it's massive fist, crushing it.

"No! He has set it free again!" thought Clar380, suddenly filed with dread. He escpaed the area as quickly as possible, shielding his presence as best as he couyld from the beast. The beast went o on to kill more.


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
Finally... IHTNC whispered in the dark.

Little that clar380 know that, IHTNC knew that someone is hiding above him at the monster's seal and quickly managed to create an illusion for the beast and whoever his hiding in the shadows.

Now with the release of the beast, IHTNC prepares to finish the creature off. But suddenly, IHTNC realized that he could use the beast's power to distract other warriors away from him, enough to kill the one who should already be dead, his mortal enemy, clar380.

The beast can die later, but clar380 is suppose to die!

He searches the city, carefully avoiding the beast's path of destruction but close enough to see if clar380 is attacking the beast. Finally, after several minutes, he saw clar380 jumping off rooftops, avoiding the light, moving towards the monster.

There you are, IHTNC says... he positions himself for the kill, waiting for the perfect timing...

Noooo!!!

Just as IHTNC is about to attack while clar380 jumps to attack the beast, the monster swiftly thrusts its arms, grabbing clar380 and ripping and crushing his body into pieces.

IHTNC was furious that he wasn't able to kill clar380. But that just makes IHTNC's easier, with clar380 dead, there's only one thing left to kill...


cLAR380
Clar380 sees his end coming as the best flies towards him and notices tha IHTNC's is watching him. Just before Clar380 is killed, he curses IHTNC with a curse of a million afflictions.

Later, IHTNC dies of necrotisinf Fascitus 9flesh eating disease. clar380 laughs from the netherworld as IHTNC is sent to hell.



JFDHFJUG
To silence all the commotion so his tea could be peacefully consumed jfdhfjug grabs a long rope, cast a binding incantation upon it ropes the great beast and with so much power on his leash there was only one thing to do ... sick him on something. so after contacting a necromancer/shamen he had Clar380's body drug from the netherrealm and placed into a new body only to be destroyed again by the great beast.


IHORTHISNAMECOUNTS
IHTNC fought the demons in hell to train and gain permission to return to the living world.

"Give me the the strongest creature on earth as your replacement!", the lord of Hell says.

So, upon reaching the living world, IHTNC vanquished the beast with his new found powers derived from his battles from hell. Then he sent the mighty beast down to the fiery lakes of hell.

"Now my mission is done. Let's have some fun now...", IHTNC says to himself.

Then he spotted clar380 again from a distance. IHTNC raised his hand (as if choking someone). Suddenly, clar380 was lifted in the air, gasping for breath. Then, IHTNC closed his fist, which in turn, crushed clar380's neck, killing her(?) instantly.

"This is gonna be really fun...", IHTNC grins.



CLAR380

For Ihopethisnamecounts, for his new found power he had to give something important in return; his soul. He sold his soul to the devil for his supernatural powers. How foolish, thought Clar380, whilst burning in hell lol. Then Clar380 thought for a moment, then it crossed his mind. "Yes, of course" He said, practicing his maniacle luagh. "Mwuahahahaa!"

He visited the devil, and told her (assuming the devil is a woman) of his horrible plan. They laughed together with glee. The devil gave Clar380 IHTNC'S soul for a small price. That being the body of IHTNC's. After being let out of hell on bail, Clar380 visited IHTNC and showed him what she held. His soul! Clar380 threw his soul to the floor with as much streght as he could, and watched IHTNC fumble in pain. "So much for your powers, eh."

Obviously, IHTNC dies and his body delivered, intact, to the devil.


JAKE
Right... but as I have the power of light that clar380 don't have I can defeat Clar 380, 'cause good always wins. My speciality is magic called Holy and that is something divine against infernal. God bless you > and R.I.P


CLAR380
Jakes first mistake was underestimating clar380. In fact, clar380 magicks were of the void which is nothingness. Before jake could kill clar380, clar380 cast his magicks upon jake. He became nothing


[u]IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
After fighting all the demons in hell just to gain power with no strings attached, IHTNC decided to leave the fiery place and return to the living world.

IHTNC saw clar380 about to throw Jake into nothingness. IHTNC stopped the time (using his new powers) and interferred with the two warriors battling. He switched clar380's and Jake's place and watched the events as he continued the time.

ZAAAP! clar380 was thrown into nothingness! (in clar380's perspective, Jake was the one thrown into nothingness but in reality, it was he who was actually thrown.


CLAR380
Clar380 was shocked. nothing happened. Considering that his magicks were of nothingness, he was suprised that it really did nothing. He sensed IHTNC for a moment before but it seemed he had vanished. Jake was still confused about what happened, but both agreed that IHTNC was tossed into the abyss after a a good chat over some warm tea. lol. They decided to have a fair duel to the death the next morning at sunrise but jake could not be trusted. Jake had come far too early and was trying to kill clar380 in his sleep. Too bad clar380 was pretending. Jake found out the hard way when he notice his head rooling on the floor. (head got chopped off)

As for IHTNC, we will never know what happened to him.


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
"... Too bad clar380 was pretending. Jake found out the hard way when he notice his head rooling on the floor. (head got chopped off) ..."

clar380 too was surprised to see his head rolling with Jake's head...

IHTNC was not tossed into the abyss but was just hiding as he sensed that clar380 really had no power. He just waited for the right moment to chop clar380's head off. And found it right after clar380 chopped Jake's head.


CLAR380
somehow and from somewhere, IHTNC's head fell to the fell next to his dieing enemies. Funnily enough, they were laughing and having a good old time chatting (considering they had no lungs or no body) about all the the other times they'd killed each other. Then clar380 laughed, "mwuahahahahah". his head flew back up to his still-walking body and re-attached itself to it's neck with a click. He played soccer with Jake and IHTNC's heads before tossing them into his furnace to warm his house.
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THIS IS WHEN THE STORY TRULY STARTS

UNKNOWNDNA

Clar380, which believed he was the final victor was soon to be proven wrong.

The beast which all though was banished to the pits of hell, had, again, been summoned into the realms of light. Now, raging out from being thrown into the nether realms, the creature bursted out in an immense fierce scream, resounding throughout the nocturnal lands. As before, the prescence of this evil entity, awoke the same familiar feeling in Clar380!

Clar tightened his fist around his trusted sword - "This time i'm ready for you, devouring one!". Clar vanished and melded into the shadows, and began his quest to slay the forsaken being. The scent of the beast was getting stronger and Clar knew he would soon come to face his greatest fear. But he had no idea of what would come to show!

The beast, which he thought were rampaging through the land, leaving death and decadence in it's wake, were in fact hiding. Clar which were surprised of this, approached the creature, vigilant, from the shadows. Unaware, the creature trudged around.
Clar approached noiseless the horrifying being, and now stood only within few metres of the beast, hidden in his shadow meld.
The creature turned around and gazed around. Clar kept completely still, while the creature looked around. The creature released a deep snarl, and turned again. "Hah - not too sharp senses, huh, bitch" Clar thought to himself.
Clar approached the unaware creature once again and raised his magical, runic sword, ready to strike.

The time had come "It's now or never" Clar thought. He layed all his strenghts into the strike, and the blade cut through the air with an enormous power, approaching the creature swiftly. There was no turning back. The blade struck it's target - or so Clar thought. The creature was gone - vanished before his eyes splitseconds before the impact. Clar was dumbfounded and outbursted from his surprise "What the--". Clar realised he had underestimated his foe. Within a flash-second, a claw grabbed around the throat and lifted him up from the ground! The beast turned Clar around and gazed him deeply into his eyes with a flaming red glow. Clar knew his life could be over within every split second now, and attempted to resist his spelled doom. He raised his sword, and thrusted his sword against the creatures chest. But fe failed! The creature had knocked the sword out of his hands. Clar bursted out in a loud roar, knowing he'd get killed any moment - but for his big surprise, the creature did nothing. It just looked him into the eyes. Clar understood nothing of what was happening as the creature released it's grasp.
Clar, which was totally confused just stared at the horror with a uncomprehending look in his face.
Suddently, an immense pain spread in his head. Clar fell to the ground, screaming from his agony, while he held his hands around his head. The boundless pains raged fiercely in his mind, leaving him stunned in the ground, screaming.
Suddently the pain ended.

Clar got on his feet, rubbing his sore head, and looked around. The beast had disappeared. He just stood, wondering - "What the hell was that all about?"

Clar went back home, still wondering. The following nights, Clar was haunted in his dreams. He came to understand the immense headache the creature had caused him was the breakdown of a mental seal. He had now come to learn of his forgotten past - his shadow-art training, his former master - the Dark Lord Behemoth - how he was saved by the Guardian of Light - IHTNC, and that... He had a brother which was not saved.

Clar was stunned as he came realised the truth: "That forsaken beast, driven by the will of the Dark Lord, is... M-my Brother"...


CLAR380
I love it!!! We really should make the RPG world game thing popular. I really should be replying to that other thread but i read this one second and was a bit dumbfounded at how wonderfully thought out this was. Are you a writer by any chance? i'll reply to that ohter thread now but dinners ready now. I cant be bothered killing unknown because he didnt kill me and plus i'd be killing myself, wouldnt I?

EDIT: Learning of his lost past, his brother and the darkness enshrouding him clar380went in search for his past.


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
(let me try and add 'thickness' to this plot)

Coincidence it seems but IHTNC always finds himself fighting clar380. And during these battles, there's a deep hatred and a thirst to kill clar380. Though his past too was blurry, IHTNC starts to wonder if clar380 has some vital points in his past.

There's got to be some reason behind this deep hatred and why IHTNC and clar380 always crosses each others path and why both warriors instantaneously draws their swords upon eye contact.

Indeed, nature may have played a trick again and IHTNC and clar380 once again met and immediately started a bloody fight to the end.

IHTNC managed to damage clar380 greatly and was about to finish him off when the beast showed up to protect clar380. IHTNC was surprised about this and decided to concede this fight for now.

"This was your lucky day..." IHTNC said to clar380 and disappears in the shadows.

(by the way, great idea to add some story to this thread)


CLAR380
The Beast breathed heavily, great puffs of warm air streaming form his nostrils (nostrils is such an ugly word). Clar380 reached out to the beast, but he vanished. Clar380 grabbed at the empty air where his sibling stood.
"If only i could remember" thought clar380.

IHTNC returned after he felt the beast's presence vanish. He soo wanted to kill Clar380, his archnemesis, his most hated enemy. He was perplexed as to why the beast had come to clar380's rescue and concluded that clar380 was in league with the beast and under its dark spell. He met clar380 with a threatning glare, "Time to free you from the beast, enemy", IHTNC said as he bowed to honor his enemy. Clar380 returned no respect and turned his back.
Outraged at clar380's disrespect he at lunged at his enemy screaming and shouting as many curses as possible. Clar380 vanished, then re-appeared behind IHTNC. IHTNC had no idea what happened but found he had an arm missing. IHTNC's eyes darted around the ground in search for his arm, clar380 had thrown it off the cliff. lol.

Clar380 explained to IHTNC why he declined his invitation to a duel. He told IHTNC about the beast and his connection to it, his past that he cant remember much of. When he finished, he threw IHTNC off the cliff to join his severed limb.


UNKNOWNDNA
Clar, the shadow warrior, standed tall from his victory, with his mind filled with bliss and glee from defeating his nemesis. His heart beatet strong, and he gasped for breathe from the previous battle. He raised his hands and gazed on his open palms with a satisfied, almost mad look in his eyes. Though he understood little of his triumpfh, his satisfaction from standing victor was too immense. "With these powers, i am unstoppable!" he thought. He reaised his hands into the air, and bursted in a victorious cry, echoing throughout the horizont.

As he stood there, caught up in this bliss - in his moment of victory - a violet aura slowly spread and wrapped around him, and a deep felt feeling of immense power filled his inner. The aura spread rapidly, and brightened up his surroundings - it looked like Clar was lit on fire. But this was no fire, and so he knew. It was his dark, shadowish powers which had awakened. Clar had become stronger than ever before! But -

In his intense satisfaction from his victory, and newly found powers, Clar was too obsessed and failed to realize which powers truly had awakened. Powers which had been sealed off within Clar. Powers of the depraving Dark Lord Behemoth!

"You fool! You have no idea of what you have awoken, Clar!" - a known voice shouted!

Clar turned his head and looked above his shoulder with a dark, violet burning glow in his eyes. It was his nemesis, IHTNC! After Clar had thrown him off the cliff, IHTNC had managed to grab on to the cliff wall, and with his remaining strength pull himself back up.
"Youuuuu!" - Clar hissed!
His voice was hoarse, and had a strange echoing sound to it. The powers within him got stronger by the second. IHTNC was barely standing, and his pains showed from his facial expression. He was shivering, and bleeding from his wounds. Blood dripped down from a bloodstained piece of bandage wrapped around his missing limb. IHTNC knew he could pass out any second - even die from his bloodloss, but he ignored those facts - he knew something much more important had to be taken care of - Clar had to be stopped!

"Clar - You're not well. You need treatment - immediately! You have no idea of what have awoken in you. Those powers are far beyond your control - you don't know what you're dealing wi--" - IHTNC's speach was interupted by a loud scream from Clar,

"Wraaaaaaaaah! Nonsens!!! - I am stronger than ever befooore. Youuu cannot stop meeeee..." - Clar's shadow aura lighted brighter than before, as an anger grew within him. Clar was ready explode.

IHTNC realized he was not able to make Clar listen. He grasped for his blade and took a solid grip around the shaft. He drew his blade swiftly, and held it up in front of him. Clar bend his head and stirred at IHTNC with a look filled with hatred, and his violet eyes were burning from this. Clar hissed loudly, and charged IHTNC. He Leaped into the air and pounced IHTNC. IHTNC jumped the the side, and swerved his sword against Clar. But he hit nothing but air. IHTNC realized this a split second too late, and Clar punched him in the back with a such power IHTNC flew through the air, and landed 5 metres away from Clar. Clar bursted into a hoarse laughter,

"Hahaha - you haaaave no idea of what you'rrrrrrre up againssssssst!" - Clar hissed.

IHTNC knocked his fist into the ground, and got in his feet swiftly. He was exhausted, and the pains from the strong blow was immense. IHTNC had not a single chance against Clar, and he knew it very well. IHTNC spoke once more,

"Clar! You need to listen to me. There's many things you don't know about. Many... Secrets which we've been hiding from you. Things are not what they seem. You're not--"

IHTNC was once again interrupted - but this time by a well placed punch in the chest, sending him another 5 metres through the air.

"I don't need to listen to yur nonsens anymore. Now you just need to shut up and take whats coming for you!" - Clar screamed!

Clar was furious, and the powers kept gaining energies - kept consuming his mind. As strong as Clar had become, as blind had he become aswell. His anger, and desire from these powers devoured his before so righteous mind. He was loosing himself bit by bit, and the will of the Dark Lord was speaking in his inner through these powers.

IHTNC tried, once more to get on his feet, but his body failed him. He had no more strenght left in him. His body was nearly completely depleted, but his mind failed to accept the fact that he was near his certain death. IHTNC's head was bend, and he could barely lift his eyes to look at Clar,

"Last chance - If you don't listen, Clar, i have no other choice but to take you by force! Give it up, and let me cleanse you from the evil prescence within you! - Or else!"

Clar bursted into an uncontrollable, contemptuous laughter. He Ignored all of IHTNC's words, and started walking slowly towards IHTNC. His body was getting, somewhat transparent as the shadow powers more and more revealed his true form. Clar approached IHTNC, and lifted his arm as he was prepared to finish off his nemesis. He grabbed IHTNC by the throat, and lifted him into the air, and IHTNC grabbed his arm instinctively. The violet, burning aura spread from the arm he held IHTNC with, and started wrapping around IHTNC. IHTNC gasped for breathe, as Clar tightened his hand around his throat. Clar's eyes burned strong, and he lifted his free arm into the air,

"I thought you were made of severe stuff. But you showed to be but an unworthy opponent. I've truly overvalued your powers!" Clar hissed. He swallowed some air, as his aura lit up and surrounded IHTNC. "You shoud've not returned. Now i'll consume your soul" - Clar continued. The shadow-aura wrapping IHTNC was about to display it's true entity as it flamed up. IHTNC screw up his eyes, and bursted out,

"Enoooooooooooooooooough!" - A blinding white, bright light shot out from IHTHC, and like the impact from a huge explosion, Clar flew through the air, and smashed into a piege of rock sticking up from the ground. He jumped on his feet, and gazed at IHTNC, wrapped in this bright light. He understood nothing.

IHTNC hang in the air, floating around in a mysterious light bubble. Clar could barely spot IHTNC from the blinding light - only a shade within. He moaned from the happenings, as he stirred at IHTNC. "That the f***" - Clar shouted. The entity within the light bubble was INTHC. He was evolving - taking his true form. Forbidden was this action, but IHTNC knew the punishment from his crime was far less than what could happen if Clar was allowed to roam free. He did what he felt inevitable. Clar contemplated the shade, as it took it's unhuman form. The arm which Clar cut off grew back out, and wings shot out from IHTNC's back. Clar's was stunned from what he now witnessed. The shade stretched it's body and wings, and the light bubble ended in a huge light-flash. Intense beam's of light shot out and blinded Clars sight. The light subsided, and revealed a strange being. The true form of IHTNC-

Above the grounds where Clar nearly had finished off his helpless foe, a being of light now hovered in the air. It was wrapped in a golden aura, and it was dressed in a think golden plate armor, covered in black runic letters. His head was hidden in a white hood with golden runic letters written across the selvage, and only white glowing eyes were to spot underneath the cowl. From his regrown hand, he held an enormous sword. Straight, with gold-glowing runic inscriptions along the middle. IHTNC was no man, nor were he a monster. IHTNC was an entity of light, a creature of the high heavens - an angel!

He had been banished from the high heavens eons ago by the high heavens. This was his punishment from disobeying his code. He was limited to the strenghts of a human being, and was condemned to sere his sentence like this for two thousand years. Now, he had, once again shown disobedience towards his mentors. But he was left without a choice. He had heard his call, and he knew what was required of him - the former Clar had to be stopped. And his human form were unsubstantial as Clar was "enriched" by his dark powers.

IHTNC spoke with a clear voice, resounding throughout the nocturnal horizont,

"Clar - i am the Guardian of light, angel and servant of the high heavens. I was banished to earth eons ago for a violation against the code of light. All though, i've continuous loyal to the high order of the light. And now the light is, once more threatened by the presence of the Lord Of Despair. An entity that has awakened within thy. It gives one the powers of the dark itself, and one become mixture of dark and evil. Thy has been given a piece of this darkness in the form of your shadow powers. But many before you failed to understand what lies within these powers, and those had suffered the consequences. Those souls fates were corrupted and turned into mindless servants of Behemoth - The Dark Lord. Just as it consumed your brother! Let not this be your fate aswell."

Clar, still confused from all this had a hard time speaking any words. He was witness to what no man had ever before seen. But he kept ignoring IHTNC's words, and hid his insecureness towards standing victor over this being behind another outburst of laughter,

"Ha, ha, ha! You speak nonsens, freak! Such a shining armor - but i doubt it'll shine that bright when i wrap it in my shadows and choke your very light! Prepare yourself, Guardian of light - Clar, the master of shadows has only just begun!"


CLAR380
AMAZING!!! Uknown.... You sure you're not a writter?

Anyways, I'm gonna try and add a splash of humour and smarm to it. But I don't know if I'll be able to write as much.

(Next chapter)

Clar380 twisted mind was split in two as his shadow magicks grew in strength. His larger brain capacity being used up by the dark-enshrouded entity that had taken ober Clar380's body so abruptly. His smaller but hidden (and largley unheard of) conscious housed Clar380's good side. With his mind split in two, clar380's good side watched in horror as his body turned into a thing of unimaginable terror. "How dare this evil touch me.." Clar380 exclaimed to his evil counter-part. And it answered with it's menacing voice as if to scare the life out of him, "Im better than youuuuu, you, you..." he seemed to be interrupted. Clar380's good side looked out his eyes.

(sorry have to make cup of tea, be back soon. Please dont write till im finished. Okay?)

EDIT: (Well, im back now, after having a nap and thinking over some writting material)

... Clar380's good side looked out his eyes, and found him self shocked at what he saw. "What the hell!?" He thought loudly to himself and his evil significant other. IHTNC had begun shinning and floating and begun doing flash tricks in the ari and wallah, he turned into an angel.
"You arsehole! How come he gets to be an angel and my body gets possessed by an evil maniacle twit!"

"Keep your thoughts to yourself," thought his evil half, casting Clar380's good side an evil glare. Clar380 whimpered... "Oh behave, the both of you." Clar380 looked around to find no one else speaking. "Who's that!" Clar380 demanded. "Im your concious" cried the voice, sounding very far away. Clar380 was hard of listening and asked who he was again. "Your concious, I'm your concious!" the voice yelled. "Ohh, i havent heard from you in a long time.. wait.. to think of it, i've never heard from you. why all of a sudden?"

"Swines, be quiet! Im having a fierce fight with an angel!" Hissed the evil half.

"That angel doesnt really look that threatning, I must say.." said concious, "you see those runic symbols on the angel? They're actually just scribbles."
Clar380's good and evil sides laughed haughtily. "And his sword looks ancient, it migh crumble into dust!" The concious laughed like a hyiena, rolling around on the floor (well, the floor of his brain).
"What kind of concious are you? Are you my good concious or the bad one?"

No answer...

Humph! Claar380 folded his arms, and decided to ridicule IHTNC agelic form by himself. Whilst watching his evil counter-part be beatin senseless.

PS: You can post now.


JFDHFJUG
As once again a climactic war was at hand Jfdhfjug could do nothing but watch in amusement as the darkness twisted Clar380's will and laughed at a holy being like an angel, was he insane to deny the might of the fallen one.

Many an angel have fallen but depending on their perspective they have developed differently in their time on earth, IHTNC is a light fallen angel still following the path of the higher poweres. Yet not all of the fallen lived like this, some took contempt for those who had cast them out and had grown into grey and even black angels. Grey angels disowned their code and lived on their own rights, doing as they pleased and living for themselves whereas Black angels took on black shining feathers and vowed their aligeance to infernal powers becoming messengers of the darkness.

Jfdhfjug was once a grey fallen himself but had learned of a power even higher than he could have imagined, he was taken under the guise of a soldier and taught dark new abilities. in time he grew in power and overtook his master like all darkness does when possible. He now was an arcangle, immencely powerful and had yet to reach the limit of his abilities. among his newly developed powers was an unmatched understanding of telekenetic power, in essense your mind is the strongest thing in the universe. after learning skills like lifting objects with your mind you learn that all your doing is affecting the structure of the object itself, with this in your mind you can directly change the atomic structure of anything you wish. you could walk through walls by breaking the molecules apart in your body and realigning them on the other side. teachings such as these were strength consuming and could easily tire out anyone attempting them, but jfdhfjug had mastered such arts making his mind the ultimate weapon.

The battle between IHTNC and Clar380's darkside had begun they clashed back and forth neither letting up both giving their all. but their powers conflicted and repelled eachother so perfectly that neither had gained any ground in the fight. this would be a very lenghty battle bringing both to thier very limits, The fallen versus the bannished a war waged throughout the centuries always to be replayed and it really never mattered who won the light was defeated and the higher powers always managed to seal the darkness away again. history was meant to repeat and it would this time as well IHTNC would be defeated and the darkness living inside Clar380 would be once again sealed away within him and his mind eraced to ensure that its power remains unknown.

The only differance this time would be the third party interfering in this age old struggle between light and dark. since Dark Lord Behemoth held a title long sought by jfdhfjug he had to be destroyed. this was not possible as long as his enemy IHTNC stood nearby and could keep jfdhfjug from having a one to one fight with the dark lord. IHTNC must be destroyed, jfdhfjug focused his energy into his hands changing the structure of the ground around the fallen angel into a cage that encirled IHTNC with psychic energy, unknowing of this the fallen angel leapt forth to attack the dark lord but was ensnared in the web of energy. he was drug back into the orb and the atoms in his body were pulled apart making his disentegrate infront of the dark lord's eyes.

Thinking this was a victory on his part the dark lord laughed in triumph as his enemy was destroyed but he soon found that he wasn't the cause of such destruction. even with the power of the dark lord Clar380's good side still remained inside and with the internal struggle for conciousness his full power wasn't available sealing his demise. with help from the frantic good side of Clar380 jfdhfjug instantly appeared behind the dark lord who senced his presence and lunged out with great strength but only hit air for his good side was blinding him giving jfdhfjug enough time to grab him from behind and grasp both hands on the sides of his head sending waves of power into his skull and eracing all knowlage of the dark lord and the clash of light and dark that hads just occured.

The evil was bannished clar380 was back to normal at last but he was curious as to what had come to pass and he must not know so his death is necassary, the arcangel jfdhfjug crushed his skull in his hands and went back into the shadows holding the new title of dark lord taken from the bannished evil until his next rebirth.


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
(Wow. Let me have some 'o those popcorns!)

Let me try...

Then IHTNC woke up and found himself below the cliff where clar380 pushed him.

"What was that all about?", IHTNC groaned as he try to pick himself up. IHTNC was confused as he recalls every detail of his dream right to the smallest details. It seemed weird because he never remembers his dreams THAT clear. Suddenly he felt something strange, as if a great war is about to happen.

IHTNC hid and reviewed his surroundings. After confirming that it's safe, he continued on his way and try to regain all of his lost energy. Then when he looked at the sky, he noticed a beam of light pointing on a nearby land mass and on the opposite end of the sky, there was a building cloud of darkness.

Suddenly the feeling rises up again, this time as if the great war is about to start. Worried, IHTNC run as fast as he can, not knowing where he'll go or what would happen. Then he saw clar380 once again, this time the feeling stopped. He now felt nothing, everything remained silent. Too silent it was deafening. As if everything on the heavens, on the earth, and below it are waiting for something.

Something great and massive anyone alive today has seen...

Due to the energy lost on IHTNC, he fainted... "No, I can't faint! Not yet! not until he (clar380) dies...", he said trying to fight off his weakness. But alas, his dream a while ago flashed in his eyes. "What is this? What does this mean?!", he said. His dream flashed faster. He saw other glimpse of his previous encounters, killing frenzies and then... His body couldn't take it anymore and failed on him, bringing him down to the ground.

clar380 saw this and was confused. "Not today, my friend. Not today.". He walked away from IHTNC's body, ignoring the chance to kill him.


CLAR380
Clar380 awoke suddenly, his heart beating as if he'd just run a marathon. "What the hell happened... Ow!" He found

bruises all his body and was wondering where the hell he got them from. "Damn it!"
He thought carefully of the last things he could remember, and the only thing that he could remember was throwing

IHTNC's severed arm off the cliff edge. He laughed haughtily after seeing the image of IHTNC joining his cut limb.
"Gosh, i wish i knew what happened..."


ihopethisnamecounts :
(Wow. Let me have some 'o those popcorns!)

Let me try...

Then IHTNC woke up and found himself below the cliff where clar380 pushed him.

"What was that all about?", IHTNC groaned as he try to pick himself up. IHTNC was confused as he recalls every detail of his dream right to the smallest details. It seemed weird because he never remembers his dreams THAT clear. Suddenly he felt something strange, as if a great war is about to happen.

IHTNC hid and reviewed his surroundings. After confirming that it's safe, he continued on his way and try to regain all of his lost energy. Then when he looked at the sky, he noticed a beam of light pointing on a nearby land mass and on the opposite end of the sky, there was a building cloud of darkness.

Suddenly the feeling rises up again, this time as if the great war is about to start. Worried, IHTNC run as fast as he can, not knowing where he'll go or what would happen. Then he saw clar380 once again, this time the feeling stopped. He now felt nothing, everything remained silent. Too silent it was deafening. As if everything on the heavens, on the earth, and below it are waiting for something.

Something great and massive anyone alive today has seen...

Due to the energy lost on IHTNC, he fainted... "No, I can't faint! Not yet! not until he (clar380) dies...", he said trying to fight off his weakness. But alas, his dream a while ago flashed in his eyes. "What is this? What does this mean?!", he said. His dream flashed faster. He saw other glimpse of his previous encounters, killing frenzies and then... His body couldn't take it anymore and failed on him, bringing him down to the ground.

clar380 saw this and was confused. "Not today, my friend. Not today.". He walked away from IHTNC's body, ignoring the chance to kill him.
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Clar380, seeing his enemy in such a state he felt alot of pity, and was shocked at how he felt for his dissoriented enemy. "Not today my friend. Not today," He said as he turned to walk away, nursing his tender bruises.
"Hey! Wait a minute!" He realised something. "You're not my friend! What was i thinking when i said that, gosh, I must be still in shock."
"You shouldn't be so mean to him..." Said a far away voice. "Who said that!?" Clar380 demanded, "show yourself!" He waited for movement but nothing happened, "I've already introduced myself once before, dont you remember?" said the strangely echo-ee voice. "No... i cant remember nothing, who are you?"

The strange voice muttered something but clar380 couldnt hear then it said clearly but in a bored tone, "Your concious, I am your concious.." Sounding uninterested. "My whaa?" clar380 asked. "Im not telling you again, i've already said this all before." said the voice angrily. Clar380 put his sore hands beneath his sore chin, "Concious, im sorry but i've never met you and if i have i wouldn't remember". "Excuses! Im tired of this, im gonna go away now" said concious. "Damn you!" shouted clar380 who realised he was now more crazier now than he ever was before and decided to return to his confused enemy.

He turned to see his enemy and noticed something different. HE HAD REGROWN AN ARM!!! "What the hell?" Clar380 was really confused. Where did his new arm come from? Why is he in this sorry state and why is he still alive for that matter? He was truly confused. IHTNC groaned loudly and this gave clar380 a fright, he squelled and fell over. When Clar380 stumbled back to his feet IHNC was gone, vanished, dissapeared....

(Now to kill you off, lol.)
Recollects bullets from Uknown's head, and reloads gun, and with a single shot blows IHTNC's head into a bloody mess!


CLAR380
After concluding that IHTNC had run away out of cowardice, clar380 continued on his quest for answers and why he never seems to remember important evens and the small and insignificant fact that his concious had decided to begin tlaking. He thought he was being punished for something he did in his past lives but obviously, he couldn't remember.

"Whare are you going?"asked clar380's concious. "None of your business, i'm trying to remember what happned, and where these damnable burises came from!" Clar380 said aloud as he trudged past a pair of girls eyeing him strangely.
"Angels? Demons?" concious asked. Clar380 froze in his tracks suddenly as though he could remember. "what are you talking about?"
Concious rolled his eyes and swirvled ideep into clar380's mind to reamin there for a while.

clar380 continued on to a small town where he met a strange character.

(Someone has to write the next part)


IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
Now on to the show...

He met jfdhfjug, still dizzy from his dream (he too felt something strange and had some random flashbacks about angels and demons). Though jfdhfjug didn't notice clar380 approaching, both of them felt the deafening silence when their eyes meet.

jfdhfjug, being used to constant nightmares about his childhood past, just rubbed his forehead and greeted the town's new visitor.

"I'd like to know where your leader is..." clar380 said to jfdhfjug.

jfdhfjug lead clar380 on their town leader's hut and left him there.

Outside, clar380 is looking for his consious but he never responded. "Hey, where are you when I needed you? Damn it. Nevermind. How am I supposed to seek info when I don't know where to start?", he mumbles.

"Come in, young one. I've been expecting your arrival, both of you...", he heard a voice from inside whispered.

"What the-? Who's the other one?", clar380 slowly opens the door while holding his sword, getting ready to strike should the need arise and unaware of who's with the elder and what will happen next.



CLAR380
His sword at the ready, he opened the door to find an old man sitting in fron of a big pot, that was bubbling and boiling away. Clar380 re-sheathed his sword as he felt that the old man was no threat to him. jdfdhfjug was walking closely behind him as clar380 stepped into the small hut which smelled of spices and chicken.
"Bhaak!" said clar380's concious, "This old man is the leader of this samll town?"
Clar380 and jfdhfjug sat down quietly before the town leader and his couldron.
The old man looked at clar380 strangely as though he could see something he himself couldnt, and nodded approvingly. Clar380 returned the gestuire, "I am honored to meet you, elder"
The old man, lifted his wrinkled hands to his face and brushed aside his bushy white hair taht revealed his walnut-like face, with little eyes peering through what appeared to be flaps of skins that tunred out to be his eye-lidds.
He stared carefully at jfdhfjug and saw something taht pleased him very much, he smiled and nodded in the same fashion as before. Jfdhfjug nodded without a word, watching clar380 carefully for sudden movements. BUt nothing happened, he was sure this was a trap but was suprised to see two young women come through the door with two plates of food and cups of sweet drinks.
Clar380 clapped his hands together hungrily, feeling really hungry.

As they ate, the old man watched them eat every bite. He watched as if he were biting the pieces of chicken himself, thruogh his tangled hair adn his large eye-flaps (lol). When they finished eating, burping and sluping their food, the old cleared his throat and said, "You are both destined to great lifes!"



IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
Meanwhile, while the two were eating at the village leader's hut, IHTNC continues to wander off some other place.

He saw a severely wounded man, half naked lying on the ground. There were lots of furs and scales around him and some burnt and still burning bushes... He muttered "clar... brother...".

Confused, IHTNC rushes to help the wounded man. "I think I've seen this guy before, something in him looks familiar.", IHTNC said to himself while picking up the poor guy. Then he realized who he was. "Oh no! Those eyes!", IHTNC remembers those eyes that gazed upon him in his certain death experience. It was from the horrible beast that he once tried to kill and was able to send to the fiery hell.

"No, I should not help him. He'll recover and become that horrible beast again. I must kill him now!". But IHTNC was hesitant, there's something inside him urging him to help the needy, and this guy is no different.

Finally, IHTNC decided to help the guy. He rushed him up to the nearest hospital and left him there under the care of the doctors.

Then IHTNC realized that the beast could awaken once again so he decided to climb the mountains in solitude, meditate, train and prepare for the nightmare that will surely occur later.




CLAR380
Clar380's brother, the evil beast, awoke. He had been asleep in a hospital bed for nearly three weeks. Hi snurse informed him that he had been bought in by a warrior by the name of ihopthisnamecounts. The beast (still in his human form and un-aware of his evil form) asked the nurse about the stranger who had saved hi life, bu the nurse had no more information about the man.

"What's you name, sir?" aksed the nurse, peering sternly at the weakened man. Clar's brother stopped for a moment and thougth carefully. I seemed to have forgotten his name!



IHOPETHISNAMECOUNTS
(hmmm... clar380's brother might be, clar280? lol <someone please give him a name> anyway...)

Meanwhile, on the mountains where IHTNC is training, he saw a dead bear and he was shocked by what he saw. Something is unusual about the bear's death, there are several toothpicks poking out of the creature's vital points. He immediately became interested to know whoever has that ability.

"I could use it against that beast if ever he awakens again."

IHTNC examined the corpse and found it still quite fresh. He then began searching the thick forest for the one responsible for the bear's death.

"I need to know this skill!", he said with much excitement.


FASTLEGS
then all in the space of one momenet a chil fell in the air and every one looked around to see the shine's new comer fastlegs coming down raven d/f+3+4 style.

everyone fell into shock at the present's of fastlegs, as she asks if she can join this quest RPG game.

and unkownDNA says " what can a little thing like you do"

so angry of the comment's by unkownDNA, Fastlegs picks up DNA and gives him a Raven speacial Undertaker.

all stuned again, Fastlegs leaves saying " i will wait for your next post for your dicssion.



UNKNOWNDNA
fastlegs :
then all in the space of one momenet a chil fell in the air and every one looked around to see the shine's new comer fastlegs coming down raven d/f+3+4 style.

everyone fell into shock at the present's of fastlegs, as she asks if she can join this quest RPG game.

and unkownDNA says " what can a little thing like you do"

so angry of the comment's by unkownDNA, Fastlegs picks up DNA and gives him a Raven speacial Undertaker.

all stuned again, Fastlegs leaves saying " i will wait for your next post for your dicssion.
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Of course you can join! - The more, the better

- It would be cool if you read the "RPG" threat through, and dropped a reply about your character there! ;)


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NOW, THIS IS WHERE WE GET STUCK, BECAUSE WE THOUGHT WE LOST THOSE PAGES, WE LOST THE STORYLINE (FORGIVE MY CAPS, LOL).
tHIS IS WHERE WE CONTINUE. jUST COMMENT FOR NOW, AND WE'LL BEGIN SOMETIME LATER.


Please tell me if I've got facts wrong or you think I marked your post a colour you don't like. lol.

The one
Clar380

This is great, Clar - just great - now we've got everything at one place. Nice job, matey! ;)

- Hmmm... There's some trouble with the quoting along the story - you might wan't to edit your post and correct the errors along the way.

But this is just great! - I'll read it all through when i get off from work, and try to put together something of a continuence from here!

//DNA

EDIT:

A few advices along

1. A writers succes is determined by his ability to catch peoples interest through his words.

If you ever were to make a book, and you want people to fall in love with your work, your work needs love and affection. It's just not enough to write a few, simple lines, leave it by that, publish your work and expect people to go crazy and buy your work. It just don't work that way. You dedicate yourself to what you do, and you do your best to create your masterpiece!
When i write, i'm somewhat passionate about what i do - i know that if i put an efford into this, people will know, and people might find my words to be catchy - interesting. Often, when i write, i end up writing for several hours. The first word spell the next and so forth - i get into a good flow, and the story almost write itself. When i'm done, i'm either happy with my work or i'm not - often i'm something of a huge self-critic and just don't like it. I know that if i want to improove my work, i gotta read it through and both add, delete and edit until everything fits.
- It's all about your affection towards your work - practice makes perfect!

2. A common story needs a common storyline

And what do i mean by this? Well - if you're to take part in a community, or in a common work, you need to not overtake what you're dealing with. If you take all focus from everything else, and start out bragging about how cool and magnificent your own character is, and how you defeat all of your enemies with your thumb, the thrill and the interest from reading and enjoying your words may fade. If this is the case, you need to move the spotlight from yourself, and focus on the greather whole of the plot - you want to remind yourself NOT to get too self-centered, you want to remind yourself that you're NOT the center of the story, but all and everyone plays as big a role as you. That is why i make these overpowered characters into non-player characters (such as the Dark Lord Behemoth). My own character, i admit, is somewhat overpowered, and plays a central role for the development when i write - and therefore i i choose to let him out from the story, and make him appear at special occations. In fact, i'm really no more than a simple birole character while you others play alot more central role throughout the story.
- Keep in mind we're common in this, and that all is as great a role as oneself. It's cooler to take part than to take control!

3. A good character is a unique character!

If i'm not to create YOUR character the way I desire instead of the way YOU wanted, i need input - i need to know exactly what i'm dealing with and the only way i could obtain such knowledge is from you! Therefore, a character scheme plays an essential role. That is, if you're interested in reading about your character as you had it thought out rather than how i want it to be. For example; I need to know how your character looks, i need to know how your character thinks, i need to know how your character behaves, i need to know about your characters abilities - such as strengths, weaknesses, flaws, powers, skills - even stuff like relations, background, former life/childhood is quite useful.
- The more I know, the better I can satisfy YOU and not just do as i seem fit!

Therefore - put in some work in your character scheme, and add more details if you desire. Your character is your lump of clay - form it to your liking, and form it enough for everyone to get enough input on what were dealing with. Make your character unique, make it special and make it exciting. But remember not to get too excided! Be both abit reasonable and realistic too - if your character is too silly or too over-powered (or even some immortal godlike), the thrill and lust from using your character takes off - and that just blows!

That, i guess, was it for now - feel free to comment or add ideas and critics!

This post was edited by UnknownDNA (2006-12-19 06:07, 10 years ago)